You've probably heard about pacing, plot twists, and cliffhangers as ways to keep readers turning pages. But here's something most writing advice overlooks: momentum isn't just about your plot—it's about your characters.
When your characters feel flat and unengaging, it's often because they've lost forward motion. They're standing still while events happen around them, rather than driving the story forward with urgent needs and escalating stakes. The Page-Turner Formula—traditionally used to maintain narrative momentum—can actually be your secret weapon for breathing life into cardboard cutouts masquerading as protagonists.
Let me show you how to harness momentum to transform your characters from passive observers into dynamic forces that readers can't help but follow.
The Hidden Connection Between Momentum and Character Depth
Most writers think of momentum as pure plot mechanics: revelations, twists, and action sequences that propel readers forward. But readers don't turn pages just to find out what happens next—they turn pages to discover what the character will do next.
Think about the most engaging characters you've encountered. Walter White. Elizabeth Bennet. Katniss Everdeen. What made them compelling wasn't just their personality traits—it was their relentless forward motion toward something they desperately needed, despite mounting obstacles.
The Page-Turner Formula works because it creates questions that demand answers. When applied to character development, it transforms static personality sketches into dynamic individuals whose every scene leaves readers wondering: "How will they respond to THIS?"
The Three Momentum Engines That Power Engaging Characters
To apply momentum principles to character work, you need to understand the three engines that keep readers invested in a person on the page:
1. Escalating Wants
Your character can't want the same thing in the same way throughout your story. Their desires need to intensify, shift, or complicate as the narrative progresses. A character who wants to win a competition in chapter one should want to win and prove something to themselves by chapter ten, and protect someone they've come to care about by chapter twenty.
Each scene should slightly raise the stakes of what your character is pursuing. This creates a momentum curve that carries readers along while simultaneously revealing new dimensions of who your character is.
2. Shrinking Options
Engaging characters are constantly losing ground. Not just in the plot, but in their personal agency. Every choice they make should eliminate other possibilities, creating a tightening vise of consequences.
When a character has infinite options, readers disengage. When they have only two terrible choices, readers lean in. This forced decision-making under pressure reveals character faster than pages of backstory ever could.
3. Accelerating Change
Here's where momentum becomes crucial: your character must change at an increasing rate. The person who emerges from chapter five should be noticeably different from chapter one. The person in chapter fifteen should barely recognize their chapter-five self.
This doesn't mean complete personality transplants—it means your character's understanding, capabilities, and worldview should be in constant, visible flux. Stagnant characters feel flat because they're not going anywhere internally.
How to Implement Momentum in Your Character Work
Now let's get practical. Here's how to use momentum principles to diagnose and fix unengaging characters:
Map Your Character's Urgency Arc
Open a blank document and list every scene where your character appears. For each scene, write one sentence: "Right now, my character urgently needs to ________ because if they don't, ________ will happen."
If you can't fill in both blanks with specific, immediate answers, your character lacks momentum in that scene. They're floating when they should be swimming hard against a current.
The fix? Add urgency. Give them a ticking clock, a mounting threat, or a rapidly closing window of opportunity. Make their needs now needs, not eventually needs.
The "Worse Than Before" Test
After each major scene involving your character, ask: "Is my character's situation worse than when the scene started?"
If the answer is "no" or "it's about the same," you've stalled momentum. Readers sense when characters aren't losing ground, and they start to drift away.
This doesn't mean constant torture—it means constant pressure. Even positive developments should come with new complications. Your character gets valuable information? Great—now they have to decide whether to act on it immediately or risk it becoming useless. They make a new ally? Perfect—that ally comes with obligations and vulnerabilities.
Create Momentum Intersections
Here's an advanced technique: make your character's internal and external momentum curves intersect and complicate each other.
Maybe your character is externally gaining power while internally losing their moral certainty. Or they're externally approaching their goal while internally realizing they've been chasing the wrong thing. These intersections create tension and reveal character complexity in ways that static personality traits never could.
The Daily Practice That Changes Everything
Want to make this stick? Try this simple exercise:
Every time you sit down to write or revise a character scene, ask yourself: "What is my character being pushed toward, and what are they being pushed away from—right now, in this moment?"
Characters need opposing forces creating momentum. Without that push-pull dynamic, they drift. With it, they spring to life, making urgent choices that reveal who they really are.
Moving Forward
Flat characters aren't usually the result of poor backstory development or insufficient personality quirks. They're the result of stopped momentum. When you apply the same techniques that create page-turning plots to your character work—escalation, urgency, and relentless forward pressure—you create individuals who pull readers through your story.
Your characters don't need more traits. They need more motion. Give them that, and readers won't be able to look away.
Start with one character. Map their urgency arc. Find where they've stalled. Then push them back into motion and watch what happens.