You've written a riveting opening chapter, but by page seventy, your test readers are yawning. Your climax hits at 85% through the book when it should land at 90%. Your middle section drags like a Monday morning meeting that could've been an email. Sound familiar?
Here's the thing: most writers know about the Three-Act Structure, but few realize it's not just a blueprint for plotting—it's a diagnostic tool that reveals exactly where your pacing falls apart. Today, I'm showing you The Checkpoint Method, a practical technique that uses Three-Act Structure markers to identify and fix pacing problems before your readers lose interest.
Why Traditional Pacing Advice Fails
Most pacing advice tells you to "cut unnecessary scenes" or "add more action." But that's like a doctor saying "feel better" without diagnosing the illness. The Checkpoint Method works differently: it uses the mathematical proportions of Three-Act Structure to pinpoint precisely where your story's timing is off.
The Three-Act Structure isn't arbitrary. Whether you're writing a 60,000-word thriller or a 120,000-word fantasy epic, readers have internalized expectations about when certain story events should occur. When these expectations aren't met, readers feel the drag—even if they can't articulate why.
Understanding The Checkpoint Method
The Checkpoint Method divides your manuscript into five critical pacing markers, each corresponding to a specific percentage of your total story length. By mapping your major plot points against these checkpoints, you can instantly see where your pacing accelerates too quickly or stalls out.
Here are your five checkpoints:
Checkpoint 1: The Inciting Incident (10-12%)
The event that disrupts your protagonist's normal world and sets the story in motion.
Checkpoint 2: The First Act Break (20-25%)
Your protagonist commits to the journey, enters a new world, or makes a decision that locks them into the story's central conflict.
Checkpoint 3: The Midpoint (45-50%)
A major revelation or event that raises the stakes and changes the direction of the story.
Checkpoint 4: The Crisis/All Is Lost Moment (75-80%)
The darkest moment when it seems like your protagonist cannot possibly succeed.
Checkpoint 5: The Climax (85-95%)
The final confrontation where the central conflict is resolved.
Diagnosing Your Pacing Issues
Take your manuscript and calculate the page numbers (or word counts) for each checkpoint percentage. For a 300-page manuscript, your checkpoints should hit around:
- Checkpoint 1: Page 30-36
- Checkpoint 2: Page 60-75
- Checkpoint 3: Page 135-150
- Checkpoint 4: Page 225-240
- Checkpoint 5: Page 255-285
Now mark where your actual plot points occur. The discrepancy reveals your pacing problem.
If your major events happen BEFORE the checkpoints: You're burning through plot too quickly, leaving your middle section empty and meandering. Readers experience this as a strong start followed by a saggy middle.
If your major events happen AFTER the checkpoints: You're delaying plot development, making readers feel like nothing's happening. They'll describe your story as "slow to get going" or "it takes forever to get interesting."
The Checkpoint Method In Action
Let me show you how this works with a real example. A writer I worked with had a 90,000-word fantasy novel (roughly 360 pages). Her test readers complained about pacing, but couldn't specify what was wrong. She felt lost.
We mapped her checkpoints:
- Checkpoint 1 (pages 36-43): Her inciting incident happened on page 22. Too early.
- Checkpoint 2 (pages 72-90): Her protagonist committed to the quest on page 45. Way too early.
- Checkpoint 3 (pages 162-180): Her midpoint revelation occurred on page 210. Too late.
- Checkpoint 4 (pages 270-288): Her "all is lost" moment hit at page 305. Too late.
The diagnosis was clear: she'd front-loaded all her setup, rushing her protagonist into the adventure, then stalled in the middle when she ran out of plot. The second half felt slow because everything was compressed.
The fix: She expanded her ordinary world, letting readers bond with the character before disrupting everything. She introduced complications earlier in the quest, spreading them across Act Two. She moved her midpoint revelation forward by 50 pages, which naturally pulled the crisis point earlier. The climax now had proper breathing room.
The result? Her revised manuscript hit every checkpoint within 5 pages of the target. Test readers described the new version as "perfectly paced" and "couldn't put it down."
Applying The Checkpoint Method to Your Manuscript
Here's your action plan:
Step 1: Calculate your five checkpoint ranges based on your total manuscript length.
Step 2: Mark where your major plot points currently fall.
Step 3: Identify your pacing pattern. Are you consistently early (rushing), consistently late (dragging), or mixed (uneven)?
Step 4: Adjust your plot points by either expanding scenes before an early checkpoint or cutting/tightening scenes before a late checkpoint.
Step 5: Re-evaluate. After adjustments, do your plot points hit within 5% of the target checkpoints?
When to Bend the Rules
Does every story need to hit these exact percentages? No. Literary fiction often delays the inciting incident. Genre-bending stories might play with structure intentionally. But—and this is crucial—you need to know the rules before you break them. If your story diverges from these checkpoints, make it a deliberate choice, not an accident.
The Checkpoint Method isn't about forcing your story into a rigid formula. It's about diagnosing why readers feel your pacing is off and giving you concrete numbers to guide your revision.
Your Next Steps
Pull out your manuscript today. Calculate those five checkpoints. Mark where your plot points actually fall. The gap between expectation and reality will tell you exactly what needs fixing. No more guessing. No more vague advice about "tightening" or "adding tension."
Your readers might not consciously know the Three-Act Structure, but their internal story clocks are ticking. The Checkpoint Method helps you write to the rhythm they're already expecting—which means they'll keep turning pages instead of checking how many chapters are left.